MY HOLIDAY PLAN
On next holiday, I would like to go to Lombok Island with my best friend. First, my friend and I will make itinerary in Lombok. We discuss to determine where we will stay and what transportation we will use in there. We will use a plane to get there, so we have to find the airlines ticket that is being held schedule to save the budget. In addition, we also have to find hotel that close to tourist attractions in our itinerary. We will reserve our preferred hotels by using travel app, because it is available various hotel options and available various promos.
Hello Intan! I think this is such a good of writing. But, it is better when:
BalasHapus1. In the second line at the sentence "we will use in there", you can erase word 'in' to efficient use of the word.
2. In the third line at the sentence "we will use a plane to get there", it will be better when you choose word 'flight' so the sentence will be "we'll flight to get there".
3. In the last line, at the sentence "because it is available various hotel options and available various promos", you can replace 'available' with offer.
thank youuu !!! <3
Hai yulita! Thank you for your time and advice! xoxo <3
Hapushola Intan.... nice holiday plan. I want suggest you about vacation in there. you and your friend can go to Gili Trawangan, Gili Pasir, Kuta Mandalika Beach, and others destination. you must try traditional foods from Lombok! because the taste so niceeee. hope your plan come true :)
BalasHapushohoo Intan, correct me if i'm wrong <3
Hapus"We discuss to determine where we will stay(,) and what transportation we will use in there".
Hallo Sauzan! Thanks for your suggestions! I'll definitely to consider it and I'll try traditional food in there. xoxo <3
HapusHallo intan,that's a good plan,
BalasHapusBut if you want to use plane to get there,at which airport you'll land ?
-ika purnama dewi/KU1B-
Hai Ika! I'll flight from Ahmad Yani International airport and landing at Lombok International Airport
HapusHai intan this is great!, i hope that ur holiday plan come true!
BalasHapusHallo Rizky! Thankyou for your attention. xoxo <3
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